rough draft

This is a quick rough attempt at a music video for ain't no sunshine, I did this in order to give myself a feel for filming different angles ect, practising with the editing software and to play around with different ideas for my real video.
From this attempt I have learnt the importance of mise-en-scene. I have discovered that even the tiniest of things can make the biggest difference, for example the fact that the lead male character in the footage is infact a woman is unacceptable in the circumstances of this video, also in certain clips ther is a plug socket in the background which somewhat ruins the effect of the location the footage was shot in. These are factors I will now be closely watching and trying to overcome in my real video.